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for Tattoo - REVISED

by LSMarz

person zonuz
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love it!! so hot!
person Archaic Romance
schedule June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Amazing. Simply and purely amazing. The descriptions, the character work, WOW. I applaud you! Beautiful!
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another hot one. He's so....guh. There isn't enough Johnny sex in the world. Well, there is, I'm sure, I've just never been any kind of part of it XD.

Again, awesome characterization and detail. You are so very good. Your writing puts me in a good mood, and these days, that's nothing to be sneezed at <3.

Oh yeah, and good job on the tattoo thing. You sound like you've had one, but hell, I've never had sex with a dog and I'm still apparently pretty good at writing it! But yeah, I've actually had that exact tattoo done (sans "Jack" written below it), and...yeah. I'm kind of a loser, but I <3 my little happy bird.
person LSMarz
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You're very welcome!
I'm glad you enjoyed it.

I figure if someone takes the time to read your work, the author has an obligation to make sure it's well written. In fact, I update all my stories as I learn more about writing. Re-reading these now, I see some grammar errors that I will eventually fix.

I'm also in the process of writing a sequel to this story, using the same character. So keep an eye out.

Thanks to everyone who reviewed my stories. Writing is such solitary work. The feedback feature is so nice!
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks, baby- for caring enough to revise your story for starters! Wish everyone would!
Thanks for your intelligent and respectful viewpoint on the difference between real life and that other universe where our stories live. Thank you for...
Let's see, how can I put this...
Well, anyway, thank you for a very hot and sexy story that rings true- which, of course, is what makes it so hot and sexy. Your revision is deeply appreciated here!
Very deeply indeed *cough*
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
As everyone before me has said, I love your writing style. This is definitly my one of my favorites and I'm not even 'that' into Johnny Depp. I really liked how you through in some plot and the epilogue just put the icing on the cake so to speak. I'm going to look at your other works now too. You have a way of depicting your characters as so 'real.' Yes I know Johnny Depp is real but none of us know if that is how he would act but I think you've convinced me! hahah.
person darkstorm888
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hott story, awsume style on writing....
person Rachael
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
All I'm gonna say is....damn! Please keep writing. You really know what you're doing
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GAAAHHH!!!! i heart johnny...*jumps up and down with hand in air* PICK ME!!!! PICK ME!!!! I DONT CARE ABOUT YOUR CREEPY LIKES!!!! PICK ME!!!!
person Cleta
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
As someone who has tattoos,this was so acurate and dead on.The blood,the ink,the endorphins.I got so lost in the story I forgot I was reading it for Johnny Depp.Excellent writing-I'd love to read ore of your work.10 out of 10 :)