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for The Mask

by Operafreak

person Randoma the Deviant
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was poorly edited, poorly formed, and completely juvenile - not to mention the fact that it was both insulting and vulgar. I can tell you made numerous, long-winded attempts at humour, but attempting is not succeeding, as this so accurately depicts: an important lesson for all writers with a snowball's chance in hell of succeeding. Your favourites were obvious, though it is undoubtably true that the amassed insults directed at the competitors of Gerard Butler's various characters was still greatly overshadowed by the cheap shots made at every actor who had the misfortune to find themselves in this sexually ignorant story; a story which is most obviously the fruit of the mind of a fangirl on crack.

Randoma can't believe that she wasted her time on this. Please, for the love of all handsome moviestars: Grow the hell up!

I would leave an email if I thought a response from yourself would be either reasonably mature or legible. Goodnight.
person DuchessLomia
schedule May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I decided to read some of your other stories and am appalled. Can you imagine if Gerry actually read this story? He would Kick your Ass! Seriously, you need to grow up and get a life. I might have to report you to the webmaster.
Sick Pervert.
person Anon
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You really have issues.... don't you?
person Alex
schedule January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yet another piece of shit!