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August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is so well written and such a great chapter, Caz I really hope you continue this story. I love it! Well done.
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July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought this story was great! You really captured the intemacy between Hayden and Natalie. Please write more.
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April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is a great story! Very sensual. And of course, Hayden and Natalie make a beautiful couple. Have you thought about continuing this story? You know, after he gets her to spend the night...
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April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hayde and natalie would make one beautiful baby girl. her name oughta be stag. i am just saying.
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March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe there's only one review on this! This is a wonderful scene and very touching. I think you did a fantastic job on this and I had to come back and read it again!
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February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautifully done, Caz! Very powerful and moving! The lovemaking between them had a stirring emotion of love in the act itself. Another great story and looking forward to more. How do you do it? Bravo!