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for Betrayal not wanted

by DanSan

person Perplexity
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* You know I only read special fanfic bro, and special fanfic I have just read.
Keep it comin' dude! You know I need more!
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DanSan

Kaoru can’t control his body hehehe
Ok so I knew it was coming, but it was still good XD

*passes you donuts for later* nice job..
person Cloey Kujaku
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(Bounces) Waii, an update! I'm one happy perv! (Does a happy jig.) Die is quickly becoming my favorite in this story. YAY. MORE KYO RAPE. Who doesn't enjoy Kyo rape?

Hmm. Maybe I should put my ideas to work and write that fanfic! (Ponders the possibilities..)

I love you and this story. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
schedule May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very nice ^__^ , it’s always interesting to see how you play this thing out.
*hits you up side the head* It does not suck…..
person Cloey Kujaku
schedule May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YOU UPDATED. YAY. I love the way you portray Kyo! My mind is filled with yummy images, now. Wai, you left off at such a good parrrt. PLEASE CONTINUE HELLA FUCKING SOON. T_T I NEED to see more Kyo torture! And Toshiya torture. (Raises hand.) I'll rape 'em any day. (Giggle.) ONEGAI! UPDATE SOOOOOON!
person Cloey (AGAIN! :D)
schedule May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ignore Cebrero. -_- Or whatever. Your style is great and the plot is very unique. I say you need to write MORE. So just, ignore it. (Doesn't want you to be sad and stop writing. T_T)
person Cerbero
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This fic sucks. Actually, the hentai in which this is based on, sucks.
And, by the way, stop writing this or else you will never get what you want.
person Cloey Kujaku
schedule April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is so fucked up.

And I LOVE it. XD


So unique and interesting! Please continue. OH, KAORU SHOULD TOTALLY RAPE KYO. XD Yummyyyyy. I love uke!Kyo. And Toshiya torture! Yuuum. You rock, dear!
person ...
schedule March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
meh-heh...Kyo X Kaoru...hee hee.
i LOVE you for writing this. Buuut...can you make
Kyo and Kaoru get together real quick? I FEAR the
warumono's life!!! ; __ ; I don't want him to be eaten
by demons from the ninth layer of hell! NOOO! >__<

errr...please update soon ^^;;
schedule March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bible black ,right? Very Cool!! well written. I hope you continue.