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for Betrayal not wanted

by DanSan

person Lord
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hm...I have started to read, then flipped through the rest of the pages...and now I am wondering where you have hidden Dir en Grey?
Or is this FF just wrong linked..-_-..strange.
I had something like this before, the Fanfiction not matching the description.
Could you help me please?
Im confused..

Lord
person Lord
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yup, now I found them..sorry, maybe I should have looked a bit closer..-__-..nja, interesting story I think, so keep on writing.
person Anon
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omg<3

And the plot thickens! :D

... so what happened to the book? @_@
person Chuu
schedule March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well having seen Black Bible before I can see exactly where you got all your stuff from...lol. But I like the jrock twist. :3
person cresc
schedule March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Now make Kyo and Kao fuck.


No, really, I like this fic.
But you could make them fuck... Mostly because I'm afraid that Kyo-kun is a virgin and then Die will do something bad to him~ ;___;

Kaoru-sama, save Kyo! Fuck him! Hard! On his bed! And on yours too! And in a bathtub! And on a table! And against the wall! In an elevator! Love Hotel! Public batroom! You must save the poor guy!

<3
person Jekkyl to Hyde
schedule March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:::GASP::: Kaoru cheating on Kyo with some Bimbo?!? [even thought they're
not lovers yet...(^^;;)] ....::::::SOB,SOB:::::.....

.......gomen if i get you angry. I know, its your fic,and you can do whatever you want.
.....Please update soon?
person Mae
schedule March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm just waiting until Ryu finally seducts Daisuke....-^_____^-
Please update soon.
person Anon
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY YOU UPDATED

And yeah school sucks.

Good chapter, continue iittt <3 <3 <3
person Anon
schedule February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
When're Kaoru and Kyo gonna come? ;~;

Great chapter, by the way XD
person sabishii saiko
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I REALLY like this ff!! I think that some of the parts are kind of funny.. please update soon!
I want to see how Kyo and Koaru fit into this fic. As for the question in the 2nd chapter,
I prefer longer chapters.