schedule
June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my Lord! That was AWESOME MESSED UP GOODNESS!!!
You should write professionally. I've always felt that the mark of an excellent writer is one that can evoke strong emotions from their reader, make the reader care for the characters, much as they would for a real person. And you are a VERY excellent writer (of course, the story featuring Mike and Chester helped, but mostly it was your writing)
You should write professionally. I've always felt that the mark of an excellent writer is one that can evoke strong emotions from their reader, make the reader care for the characters, much as they would for a real person. And you are a VERY excellent writer (of course, the story featuring Mike and Chester helped, but mostly it was your writing)
schedule
October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this was so sad.... i actually cried... it was just so moving....
i love chester so much.... thank you for writing this story...
i love chester so much.... thank you for writing this story...
schedule
July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't want to make this seem like a flame. But that was just too hard to understand and was kinda dull. It really didn't seem to hold my attention. Yes it's a strange story but it seemed as if you were trying too hard, it just kinda left the story dragging on. It started off good, but I'm not sure about this update. Good luck and please don't get mad at me, just see it as motivation. I truly wish you good luck, I know you can write good so...yeah.
schedule
June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! UPDATE!
schedule
June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi,
I really like this story,but i think you should have Mike die,but Sam lives. Then Chester will have to deal with the repercussions of that.
I really like this story,but i think you should have Mike die,but Sam lives. Then Chester will have to deal with the repercussions of that.
schedule
June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omg, what a twist, but I have a question, did Sam die? I wasn't sure if she did or not cos it said that the gun only had one bullet and Chester shot Mike and Mike missed Sam and shot the mirror, so that means she's alive right? Anyhoo, great story and a very dark and unexpected twist. You better continue this or I will be forced to send a train of reviews upon you :P Good Job!
Jackie_Boi
Jackie_Boi
schedule
May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Continue!....please ?
It's really good and I would love to see more!
It's really good and I would love to see more!
schedule
April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, Anon, I know you really want to see the next piece, and I'm sure a whole load of others do to, but I've got a huge heap of fanfics I'm trying to finish and this one is comeing along as well, but it's not a priority. I'd love to have more time for it, but I want to see more reviews first (I've got a limit, once it's reached, you will be rewarded ^_^). So spread the word, get people to have a read and encourage them to review! I have another fanfic installment on the way, so keep an eye out.
schedule
April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I read the story and I'm waiting for updates. I love it write more plz. *big cute puppy eyes*
schedule
April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yeah, I wanna know the rest of your fic ^^ I mean, it's great and all... continue! :) °°KisSes & chOcOlAte 4 yA°°