AFF Fiction Portal
errorYou must be logged in to review this story.

rate_review Reviews

for Icarus

by SolusNemo

person BlackCat9
schedule May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not sure if I've reviewed this one yet, but if I haven't then I'm a dumb shit. Fucking awesome. I love the idea that Joel doesn't like Joel's car or home, but it doesn't hinder anything, just adds a great contrast to the story. Great job!
person BlackCat9
schedule May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*edit* That Joel doesn't like Benji's home....Forgot to read over what I wrote...:p

Hell I forgot to add that the sex scene was amazing and the ending was perfect. ^_^
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Scaught, the main character is Joel and it’s in his Point of View. This is also AU, I guess I should have made that a little clearer, huh?
person Scaught
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I know the summary said 'incest' but how is this story incest? It would make more sense if it was Benji and Billy or Aaron or Paul or anyone one. The two main characters didn't really know each other.
person ignotus
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I both love and hate the last sentence. Feel so bad for Joel. Want to kick Benji where it counts, several times. Hard. The fucking bastard.

::gives AU!Joel a hug::

["flew too close to the sun..."]

::cries:: ::floods room::
Sort of more realistic than if happy ... but hey! Happy ending could've happened too...right? Want to write a double AU? Make poor Joel happy?
Please? ::kicks AU!Benji several more times ("I hope it fucking well falls off, you bastard!!")::

LOL >.<


person Lauren
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story, you should write more! The only part that I didn't like is the ending.. Why don't they ever see eachother again?