AFF Fiction Portal
schedule June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
there are no words to describe how bad this is.
person Lily
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You need help, really, if this isn't a dumb joke. That's not only bad in terms of art and writing (not to mention grammar and spelling), it's just really, really sick.
person LC
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* Mana-hime, did you take those pills again??

Mana: ...

LC: Damn you... That was the third sick hallucination this week!!

Mana: ...

This was... rather interesting, *sick grin* but... household applicances? ^^;;; Oh my...

Nothing is better than your Mana fics, but I wish you could write more about what happens after the sex scene... so... mm... you wouldn't happen to feel like writing a fic with Juka as the evil one, Mana as... always, and Gackt as his saviour? Or at least some Gackt/Mana fluff in the end? Huh? Huh? *puppy eyes*
person Anon
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was perhaps the most idiotic story that I have ever voluntarily read. No formatting, no spell checking, and an odd, weird plot. Was he tripping on acid?
person Anatasia
schedule March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ouch *wince* I'm going to have to keep an eye on my appliances now...>.>...
person DanSan
schedule March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hide san knows how much I liked this n___n
When you told me about this fanfic, I thought you could only be joking, but then, I took you seriously and I couldn't wait to read it XDXDXD
You make the impossible very possible, so, please, keep!
person Lord
schedule March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay, bin erste...öhm..okay, auf englisch denn mal.
Sick and wonderful.
You know what I mean, ne?
Like cables..like mana..like this one.

^-^

Lord