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for On the Brink of Destruction

by canesfreak

person Dominated Love Slave
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG That is the GREATEST chapter EVERR!!! BILLIE is soooo hottttt! You got excellent writing skills, unlike a lot of people here! I'm psyched out to read the rest of it. Write soon!!
person Mon
schedule April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is such an awesome story! I'm glad billie entered!!! Please update soon!!!
person Freedom Fries
schedule March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
gr8t story!! i loved da descriptions u chose, and i could deffy see the pictures in my head as they were happening. it wuz like a movie, and i cant wait to see..err i mean READ the rest of it!
person Cat
schedule March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Neat start!
Characters are interesting, Emily seems like a sweetie. Can't wait for more <333