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for Blissful Beginnings

by limonize

person Banana Bender
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great fic! Hot boys, lots of sexual tension. Nice to see the Brisbane lads getting some action! One minor bit of advice though, Aussies don't say "Sod off." That's more UK than Aussie. I'm assuming by the way you spell 'color' that you're not Australian. We say "Piss off", "Rack off", even "Fuck off" but never "Sod off." I just kept picturing Spike from Buffy when I read that. lol That's something he would say.

Yeah, I'm being picky, I know but really, it was a great fic. :)
person abi
schedule May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely loved it!!!!! One of the best fanfics I've read in a while. Any chance of some new chapters...?