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by keriihikaru

person Sousetsu
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ha... Die suck a dirty boy... Gods that was hhot hot hot! YAY!
person Hihi
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nyahah! continue^^!
person KyoisHOT
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMFG! I love you, This was kick ass! I love the ending so much, The part about Die, I burst out laughing. Heh heh hentai no?! And the whole, “umm, aren’t you supposed to disappear now?” made me laugh as well. MMm Kyo and Kaoru having sex is good for the souls! LOVE IT!
person Mochi~
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O_O



Oh, God...



Will you marry me?
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cloey Kujaku,
really? um, but I don’t know if I can write Toshiya very well but check out,
http://www.strawberryshinya.net/archive_one.html
Aoi writes some great Die x Toshiya fics.
And I am glad you enjoyed my story. XD
person Cloey Kujaku
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"Aren't you supposed to dissappear now?"
"No, you are!"
GREATEST. ENDING. EVER. XDD I love this story. I must of read it like, fifty times. It's so hillarious and delicious at the same time! AND DIE. XD You should make Die molest Toshiya if you ever decide to write another Diru fic. I never see that pairing! WAIII. Thank you so much for sharing this awesome story!


~Queen O' Smut, Clojaku
person Zeraphine
schedule May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yeah, yeah, sequel sounds goood!!!! *loved it*
person DanSan
schedule May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^__^ It's great.... with caps... GREAT!!!!!!!!
I liked this a lot lot lot!!!!
I'll have to read it again another day anyway, 'cause as I already told you, today is not a good day for me. I'm really not in the mood for existing.
But it is GREAT! I loved it... :P:P:P and Die..... just perfect! But KaoruxKyo was the best!!!! BEST!!!
Yeah, I do want a sequel!!!!
Thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Keep!
person Kai-chan
schedule May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
<33 Yummy lemons, ne? :P

You should help me with my lemon writing. :X 'Cause i suck at them.

But you write them really well! ^0^b Good job! Hehe~
person ...
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was really good! :D
I hope you do continue.
ARGH! IT was AWESOME!!! XD XD XD
^^;;