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for Bleeding Soul

by Jackee

person wasup
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Uh...hello....anyone there? Um...like...do you have anymore? Or is that all ya got? Did the ol' muse dry up and run away?

I do so very much want to see what Kenneth forces on his captive. I do so very much want to read how he prepares him and makes him like it before he......what?

C'mon. It's good stuff. Give it us!

wasup
person Inshadow
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
More! More! More!

You keep us waiting?

Inshadow
person Kangaroo Jack
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Blimey Mate!

That's hardly fair now is it? Makin' us wonder and all what the bloke is gonna do to 'pretty boy'!

Kanga
person darkbloom
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great stuff! Where in the hell is the rest of this wonderfully perverted story? More!! Please, I'd like to see what the next chapter holds!

Darkbloom
person Willsdarkangel
schedule August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay....you've got my attention...will there be more???

Willsdarkangel
person Anaru-Minime
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh come on!!!

Minime: You have to hurry up and fucking update!!! Orlando your ass is so totally fucked!!!

Anaru: -gasp- Watch you mouth!! Your not even old enough to be on this site!! Let alone to cuss!!!

Minime: Laddy fuckin da! Your not old enough either!! Your only f-

Anaru: Updatesoonbyebye!!!
person Anon
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aaahhhh ORLANDO!!!! u can not leave it like that r u trying to kill me
person caseymochridh
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You aren't going to leave it there, are you? Please continue and let us see what happens!
person spacemonkey
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great first chapter, im curious about who the mistery caller/stalker is.
Please update, i want to read more.
person casey
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting! More?