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March 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story has me laughing my ass off at parts and crazy turned on in others...very good plot, actually seems plausible. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
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July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg i loved this. Loved it like a fat kid loves cake. i have to say tho the part a few chapters back when she said "Oh my god I'm a mermaid" i sprayed the milk i was drinking all over the screen from laughing. gross but true. I cant wait to see where this goes i hope u update soon. :D
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July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
thanks for updating:-D I can't wait for more!!
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June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Both surprised and pleased to see an update on this! Even though I only read it a few nights ago, I had to catch myself up really quick. I might mention, though, that in chapter 6, I noticed your sentence structure wasn't as varied as it has been. Might be something for you to keep an eye out for.
Funny and surprising ending. Hope to see another update soon!
Funny and surprising ending. Hope to see another update soon!
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June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Where's the next chapter? This story is wonderful. Great characters and plot, even sex aside. Please update it soon!
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February 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I reallly like this story. Are you going to have an update anytime sooon? I want to know what happens he he. :)
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February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AND???? LOL!
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January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please tell me you are going to update this?! Update it!
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January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol i love that he rubs his bulge! hehehe
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January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*falls over* you can't end it that way, but it was good! Continue it, please!