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August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Never underestimate the innocent ones. They pack a punch. I like. I'm looking forward to more of your work. Perhaps more of Orlando's little escapades?
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November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHA!! That was utterly evil and I loved it, Orli pretending to be all sweet and innocent. I think you could do some type of sequel to this fic that would be brill. Another turn-about.
I was actually feeling sorry for poor little Orli till it got to the end and I couldn't stop smirking. You definately need to write more fics.
LOVED IT!!
I was actually feeling sorry for poor little Orli till it got to the end and I couldn't stop smirking. You definately need to write more fics.
LOVED IT!!
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June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MOREMOREMORE, please. Johnny/Orli/Brad together
God i love subtle Conquerer Orlando.
You're fantastic
God i love subtle Conquerer Orlando.
You're fantastic
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June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely loved this fic. You really had me feeling sorry for Orli until the end. Very clever idea. I'd LOVE to see the adult version of Troy! Wish it existed.
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June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOVED IT.....LOVED IT.....LOVED IT.....LOVED IT.....LOVED IT.....LOVED IT.....LOVED IT.....LOVED IT.....LOVED IT.....
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June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GO ORLI, GO ORLI, GO ORLI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol i felt bad when i read the part about Johnny and Brad tricking Orli but i loved the twist with Orlando lol, ohhhh if only they knew!!!!!!!!! Oh that would be so rich!!! hehe, that was great!!!!!!!
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May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well done!!
I loved it all the way....
Looking forward to read more of your material.
Keep writing.
I loved it all the way....
Looking forward to read more of your material.
Keep writing.
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May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good story with a surpricing ending. Well told story and with a lot of details, what a plot, One can almost see it on the inner screen.
English is not my beste and in writing I'm wery bad
English is not my beste and in writing I'm wery bad
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May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Smirk* Wonderful! I absolutely loved Orli's little list at the end. And it was extremely well written, considering english isn't your first language. Look forward to reading more of your stuff soon!
~Loki
~Loki