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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oo make her a slut
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November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that is some hot stuff keep it up
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November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good work!
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October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Normally if I don't have anything good to say I don't say anything.
But I think I'll make an exception. This is rubbish.
But I think I'll make an exception. This is rubbish.
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August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well that was.... interesting to say the leat
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August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
the plot was horrible the story was horrible u need to work on ur writing the idea was good but work man work
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July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
REALLY BAD AND DISGUSTING....damnit....you need to learn how to write better...and remember PARAGRAPHS ARE YOU FRIENDS....
IM really sorry to say...but you need to go back to grammar school...FOR GRAMMER...*fumes*
IM really sorry to say...but you need to go back to grammar school...FOR GRAMMER...*fumes*
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June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not a bad fic, but your writing could use a bit of polish.
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June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was awful. And I'm not talking about the subject matter, I mean the writing and how the "plot" developed. It reads like a cheap porno. Did you type this one handed?
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June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
1) Your writing sucks on a technical level.
1.5) Your writing sucks on all levels, actually.
2) I find it amusing that you reveal your latent homosexuality by describing the huge penises, and also with the anal rape. I'm not going to psychoanalyze you, but maybe that's why you want to see women in humiliating positions?
3) Suck my internet cock.
http://www.smartania.com/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?t=35
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1.5) Your writing sucks on all levels, actually.
2) I find it amusing that you reveal your latent homosexuality by describing the huge penises, and also with the anal rape. I'm not going to psychoanalyze you, but maybe that's why you want to see women in humiliating positions?
3) Suck my internet cock.
http://www.smartania.com/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?t=35
I contributed to this, and I'm glad to put it to good use.