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May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mmm...lemons...
I like a bunch of weird pairings in the wonderful, wonderful world of JRock...and, this is one of them... xD Then again...putting Kyo with /anyone/ is a bit out there. But, we still love the little sex-dripping terror. Also, Leader-sama being dominated is always amusing to see.
This is a good one...keep it, please~!
I like a bunch of weird pairings in the wonderful, wonderful world of JRock...and, this is one of them... xD Then again...putting Kyo with /anyone/ is a bit out there. But, we still love the little sex-dripping terror. Also, Leader-sama being dominated is always amusing to see.
This is a good one...keep it, please~!
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May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*__*
it was a tasty lemon. :P
it was a tasty lemon. :P
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May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am new around here as you may know. And I am sorry, I would review more but I never know what to say in them. I am shy and I get all nervous and end up saying something stupid. This community has helped me try to open up a little. And I have met some very nice people on here. I did enjoy this story and I do enjoy your writing. I am sorry to see you go. I don’t about you, but I’m happy if I even get one review.
Take Care, k?
Take Care, k?
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May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I do review... and I was waiting for the rest of The Adventures of Dir en Grey...
Anyway, as you are a great writer, I will read all your fics on your site and I'll always leave a comment ^__^.
You are worth it, but I think you already know that, ne?
Keep writing, always!
Anyway, as you are a great writer, I will read all your fics on your site and I'll always leave a comment ^__^.
You are worth it, but I think you already know that, ne?
Keep writing, always!
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May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooooooooooooooooo. That was hot. XD
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May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sad you are leaving, but still, i will definitl have a look at your homepage *gg*
this fic was funny, cheered me up a little ^-^
yours, zera
this fic was funny, cheered me up a little ^-^
yours, zera
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May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was friggin amazing. Too bad you won't
post anymore. ; __ ;
Nice website, by the way ! XD XD
k, bai!
post anymore. ; __ ;
Nice website, by the way ! XD XD
k, bai!
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May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
There aren't many reviewers around here. But what I've noticed more than that is the quality of the reviews. I don't know about you, but I want more than:
"Great story! I loved it! Update soon!"
I won't say that.
I liked your fiction, although I don't know of the series. That's one of the great things about looking around here. I noticed that you often stuck "-ly" adverbs in among the verbs, so I thought that I'd mention that writing is stronger if you come up with verbs to express such actions. (But if you look at my fiction, it's the same way). You've organized this so well with paragraphs, proper grammar, and dialogue. That impresses me, as much around here does not meet those criteria...
Getting around to the content, your portrayal of characters was accurate for humans, although the story seemed a little rushed. It might be done better with more detail, or even another chapter (eek). The lime reminded me of the standard limes I see around here--not a bad thing at all, but it didn't stick in my mind as something different and special.
I enjoyed reading your story. I hope you get more reviews.
"Great story! I loved it! Update soon!"
I won't say that.
I liked your fiction, although I don't know of the series. That's one of the great things about looking around here. I noticed that you often stuck "-ly" adverbs in among the verbs, so I thought that I'd mention that writing is stronger if you come up with verbs to express such actions. (But if you look at my fiction, it's the same way). You've organized this so well with paragraphs, proper grammar, and dialogue. That impresses me, as much around here does not meet those criteria...
Getting around to the content, your portrayal of characters was accurate for humans, although the story seemed a little rushed. It might be done better with more detail, or even another chapter (eek). The lime reminded me of the standard limes I see around here--not a bad thing at all, but it didn't stick in my mind as something different and special.
I enjoyed reading your story. I hope you get more reviews.