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by Shelle

person Nicky
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was the cuttest ending. I love the story!
person Emily
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic job!! Completed fics are always the best...:)
person Laura
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I really enjoyed reading your story. Its a great idea and your writing was well done. You really let the characters become alive! Go on like that, I'm looking forward to many more stories! Maybe a prequel....?
person Fanny
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like your story! I like the plot! I like your characters! I like everything of this story!
And it would be a mistake not to write a sequel! Please for us. :-))
I'm so interested in Orlando being a father.

You did a great job. All the best
Fanny
person Fishy
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely brilliant!
person Kelly Lynn
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was so beautiful I cried. Now I feel bad for being mean about the cliff hanger. This was well worth the wait. You should really consider writting a prequel. Thanks for sharing this with us.
person bunny
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey great story!!!!!!!! Great ending!!!!!!!! great every thing!!!!!!!!!!! I think that you should do either a sequal or a prequal to this story... I could really see either of those or maybe even both.... so give it some thought maybe. Great work.
Bunny
person bunny
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are so nasty... to leave the story with that cliff hanger!!!! AHHHH!!!! makes me want to scream... you have to update and you have to do it soon before people start to spontaneously combust!!!
person Kelly Lynn
schedule June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Arg! How could you just leave it like this? Thats so unfair! You must write more and soon. This is so fabulous to read.