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for You STILL Can't Control Destiny

by pensfan100

person ME
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is so great! you SO totally need to update, fast! we have all been waiting! my friend and i love Hayden and Natalie so much! and this story just adds on to what we love so much about them! so sexy! please update soon!
person Valerie
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, all I got to say is this is a fantastic fic. There are not too many Hayden and Natalie fics out there, you really captured thier persona's. Well done. Hope you continue to this.
person T-BONE
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can you please update this?!?!?! I come here every single day looking if you updated but all i keep seeing is that five chapter only thing! I will do anything for you! Just please, please, please update!!! If you don't update soon I swear that I'm gonna go crazy! Please! I want to read what happens next! Everyone wants more of your brilliant writing! Please update!
person Lonnie
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Both of the You Can't Control Destinies are wonderful. I love them and I hope you continue to post this one.
person pensfan100
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I apologize to all of you! Right now I am in the middle of painting a room and it turned into a MAJOR deal! I will have the epilogue to Mine To Give up by the end of this week (cross your fingers) and then it's back to continue this story or The War.
person Novalee
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I always love your stories. They are so beautifully written. Please write more soon because I'm going crazy not knowing what's gonna happen next. You always manage to keep me on my toes.
person mousie
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
C'mon now...I've been coming here for over two weeks now hoping for an update on this fic...and all I get is the occasional update for a hayden/ewan fic. YUCK!
person T-BONE
schedule July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I come to this website every single day to see if you updated. And you haven't! Please update!!! I really would love to read more! I love Hayden and Natalie so much. I just wished that they were together. Anyways, this is an awesome fic, I love it so much so please, please, please, PLEASE update!!!
person Angel
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM

I love this story please update ASAP.
person Caz
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bonnie, pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease, please, update, soooooooon! Ta :D