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LOLOL! Brilliant! Can't wait for the next chapter. Please hurry with it, Bonnie :D

*whimpers* Natalie is so evil. :)

.............Thats definitly a different version of Trivial Persuit............


I like it ;]

Hubu huba huba........... DAMN!

How funny was it (to me at least) that I found this story, just as the shuffle on my iTunes found my old bellydance music. I love your Hayden & Natalie stories and can't wait to read where you take them this time around.

Good Job.

Ah, beautifully done, Bonnie. Sooooo sensual and erotic. Looking forward to the next part :D

i love sequels...*sniffles* thank you..

Hey, glad to see you kept your word and started the sequel! Maybe we'll see "Mine to Give" completed someday too...Pleazzze! I have to say that one's my favorite.

C'mon, all you Bonnie fans out there, she needs more encouraging reviews for inspiration!!!

I love your stories! Please don't ever stop posting them! EVER! Please continue with this story! PLEASE! I'll beg if I have to. Oh wait a minute, I already did!!!

Hey, am I the first one to review here? Well, as one of the people who wanted to see this story up, I just have to say THANK YOU!! I loved 'You Can't Control Destiny' and am so excited to see the continuation of the story. Please continue to post what you've got. All of your stories are incredible.

And aren't Hayden and Natalie the world's best text messagers, or what? Thank you for using proper English - I don't think I could have handled seeing, "30 MINUTES!? Y? 30? O, ll ryt bt dEz TWINS r dwn 2 almst Ø n f 1of em triS 2 CLIMB ON ME AGAIN..."

So...if we beg enough, will you post the chapters more quickly?