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by spikes1830

person Jen
schedule February 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
-insane giggles from the Jen- Oh I can't wait to read the next chpt.
person Jen
schedule February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So far it's pretty good. There is a few grammatical problems and one where u r like what does she mean? but I forgot to copy and paste it so u'd know what I was talking about. There is one thing I just wanted to tell you Johnny keeps his love and work very far apart and watching himself on video makes him sick, there is only one that he liked and I totally can not remember which one it is either, it's in my True Life mag that I have of him. . . I can't wait till I read the rest of ur story!
*Peace*Love*Happiness*
person Steph
schedule January 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love your story its awesome.
schedule November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol @ pols
schedule October 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OM*G!!! You're amazing! I like your style! Go on snap to, luv! I'm waiting for another chapter sooon!
person The shark keeper
schedule October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damb this is one fab story! I can't wait to read more! Love the new chapter!
person zonuz
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I need to know more!!! this story is amazing!! please update soon!!
person Koda
schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
More wonderful work! Can't wait for the next one! Maybe it won't take so long.. but, hey! Either way, I'm not complaining!! :D Good job!
person Koda
schedule September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww! Hey, don't feel bad! I don't ever seem to finish mine either! :) I love this and I think it's great that you're going to update some more! Thanks for letting us all know! I know how it can be hectic and Writer's Block is a butt sometimes! :) We'll still read! You can count on that! ;)
person LaKoda
schedule August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Holy cow! hahaha I won't even say what I'm thinking... **giggles to self...** Is it bad that my friends are just like that? :P My Holly is just the same as "my friends" from the story! :) This is wonderful, hun! Not just b/c of what it is about, but what you have done in writing it! It's easy to tell that there has been alot of effort put into this! I'm enjoying it and can't wait to read more! You must do more! If not, I shall send in soldiers from the Chocolate Pumpkin Puppy Club to harrass you! **grins** But, I know you'll be nice and post more! ^^