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October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hiya~
Your fic is great, I really like how you develop your plot and how you describe things~ Simply amazing ... and the fic's pairing is sweet as well, but you already know this :D
But there are a few German typos that I'd to mention (don't want to be a wiseass just help you a bit ^-^):
“Du bist so schön, Flake…”
“Und dir, auch, Till.” he speaks, not much louder than a breath, as he begins to strip me of my fabric confines.
It has to be "Und du auch, Till", dir is the wrong grammatical case.
And last but not least, it's Das Ende not Die Ende
So, please keep up your good work *hugs*!
Your fic is great, I really like how you develop your plot and how you describe things~ Simply amazing ... and the fic's pairing is sweet as well, but you already know this :D
But there are a few German typos that I'd to mention (don't want to be a wiseass just help you a bit ^-^):
“Du bist so schön, Flake…”
“Und dir, auch, Till.” he speaks, not much louder than a breath, as he begins to strip me of my fabric confines.
It has to be "Und du auch, Till", dir is the wrong grammatical case.
And last but not least, it's Das Ende not Die Ende
So, please keep up your good work *hugs*!
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July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww, that's just fantastic! I loved this the first time I read it, but somehow managed to forget who's written it - thank goodness it was you!
Soyes, love this somply because it's just so entertaining! Richard is such a stroppy queen!
*grumbles about there not being enough pictures of Flake and Till kissing on the 'net*
Love!
~Lupie xxx
Soyes, love this somply because it's just so entertaining! Richard is such a stroppy queen!
*grumbles about there not being enough pictures of Flake and Till kissing on the 'net*
Love!
~Lupie xxx
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June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like all of Cyndiana´s rammsteinfics, but Till/Flake is my all time favorite pairing. Hurrah for this fic!
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June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah yes... my favorite Rammstein pairing. Go Till/Flake! ^_^
There was a typo I noticed... where Till says "I can bring myself to say no more. I decide to show him, and I pull him into a passionate kiss."
Shouldn't that be "I can't"? Just wondering.
Otherwise, I liked it a lot. Of course, description always helps... but for quick stories like this, it's not necessary.
Very nice. ^_^
There was a typo I noticed... where Till says "I can bring myself to say no more. I decide to show him, and I pull him into a passionate kiss."
Shouldn't that be "I can't"? Just wondering.
Otherwise, I liked it a lot. Of course, description always helps... but for quick stories like this, it's not necessary.
Very nice. ^_^