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July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm going to be honest ... it sounds interesting, but my mind is distracted by the bad grammar/writing. Capitals are GOOD. Bad grammar is BAD. Theres a quick lesson for you. I don't mean to sound harsh ... but maybe a BETAer might help?
Sorry if I sounded mean.
~ Mercika
Sorry if I sounded mean.
~ Mercika
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July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Capitalize properly. Try to prevent it from reading like a bad - if slightly hot - porn flic, unless that's what you're going for. Diamonds, these words...
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July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i cant wait till tha next ch
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July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
interesting story...I can't wait for readin more about it!
She accepted the offer...I think she doesn't know yet what she is getting herself into ;)
Update soon,please :)
Randy & Dave and a woman together....WOW!
She accepted the offer...I think she doesn't know yet what she is getting herself into ;)
Update soon,please :)
Randy & Dave and a woman together....WOW!
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June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love it can't wait to read more