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July 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very well done! An interesting story line, though I believe it could have used a bit more backstory, and possibly an explination of why eeverything of Orlando was gone from her memory, but aside from that, very, very good! More soon please!
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February 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great! One of the best that i've read so far... It would be great if you add a story in it but, it could do with only one chappie... Well, baboosh! Great story!
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June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
She was stupid fro believeing the tabloids about Orli being a womanizer and for leaving him behind.