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for Four Men Two Rooms and Movie Magic

by DeeLeit

schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay for emma! i'm not such a fan of the rest of the story (sorry, that's just me i guess), but the ending made up for it! thanks.
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HAAHAHAHAHAHHA!!!! That was simply SICK. Sad that I enjoyed it, too. Bad Dobby.
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PS: Hey, Anon, what Kindergarten did you go to?!
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well. Nicely done, with the planning and execution, but I have one qualm: in making David Thewils and Jason Isaacs have incredibly hot, wild sex on their hotel bed, you switched their positions halfway through. Now, if you were to, say, detail that bit more, or have them pick a position and stay that way, this would be five-star indeed.
person Anon
schedule August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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person MadEye
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Paris Hilton says: "That's hot."

Hee, hee. Emma Thompson. Hee, hee ...
person MickeysMonkey
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmm what a coincidence that this little ditty would show up just as there's a whole uproar over stories posted over here. What good timing, I must say. The other story got taken down I see.
Sheena, this looks like your writing.
person 8inchCaliper
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
holy fucking shit, Dee Lightening!

That was fantastic! FANTASTIC!

OMG...I was...*cough*...very thoroughly taken with this one. *giggle*

mansandwiches all around, eh? *grin*

- and that last final surprise touch! Priceless...*wink*


-snapeslave
person Anon
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Pure crap. The worst writing I've seen outside kindergarten!