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Oh my, the tangled webs we weave. Just imagine, if this fic was true, the tabloids would have a field day. Scratch that. A field week, if not year!

Hey Laura,
you're back :-)

Oh God, I don't know what to say. I feel so honored! Thank you so much for this chapter, I love it!!
You know what, I'm not writing reviews to all story I am reading, just to the really good ones and your ff is more than just really good!
I like your characters, the whole plot and everything on this ff! And what I like about YOU, THE WRITER, is that you are always reliable, loyal and faithful and that is for me really important for a writer!

So, please continue with that great fanfiction
Big Hug Fanny ;-))

You're right, pregnant women are definitely not made of glass. :-))

I love your story hun! It totally rocks! Keep up the good work hun! I am working on an Orlando story myself, and it is harder than others think to write one of these stories. Trying to keep your inspiration and your thoughts going while there are so many other ideas floating around your head. Anyways, just wanted to drop a line and let ya know that I am enjoying your story.

~!*!~ Jamie ~!*!~

Hi Laura,
Oh, I am so happy about that what happend in this chapter! I'm so excited and curious about what happens next! *smile*
It was just a little joke, with the "kitschy" happy ending. I quite (or do you say "pretty") sure you will write the perfect ending for this story.
But pease don't write that fast, because I don't want the ff to end. ;-)
Hug Fanny

P.S. I wish you a lot of fun in your vacation!! Enjoy it!

This is my favorite fiction!!! Please hurry and write more chapters!

Hi Laura
Argh, at first I thought "wow that is so nice she is keeping the baby and will be with Orlando together (a wonderful and kitschy happy ending)."
But you don't want it like that .
And then I was a little shocked and I thought "It would be so easy for our 2 characters but they make it so difficult, for themselves!"
But I tell you what: "I love your story with all the difficult :-) characters and everything else, because it's never boring, it is always thrilling and exciting and you never know what happens next (because of the dreams)!!
So please continue like that.
Big hug Fanny

P.S. A little tip, I love kitschy happy endings :-))

Wow! That was really good! I hope she doesn't get an abortion...poor Lando! She's not even giving him a chance, and it's his baby! She should talk to him about it before she goes off and kills it. I mean what if he wanted to raise the baby on his own? Be a single father? I know she would still have to carry the baby for 9 months and then give birth to it but it's just not fair to kill his child when he doesn't want her to. Why can't she see that? Grrr!! I hope they get it all sorted and stop arguing soon.
Update soon pleaseeeeeeeeee!
Jess
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Wow Laura, now it is going to be interesting.
I'm asking myself all the time what will happen next and this is why I can't stop reading your great story.

Since this chapter I also fall in love with the character Ann!
She is such kind of person all peopel should be happy of knowing her (I hope I write that correct but I think you know what I mean).
I don't have any brothers or sisters but this is a perfect description of a sister. A sister who is always there for you.

You did it very well
See (or better read) you!
Hug Fanny

I love it!! I think it's totally awesome :) I hope she now goes to Orlando and tells him about the baby. He loves her so he'll be so happy, and I'm sure she loves him as well so that's even more perfect :D I just have one question...how does Katie and Jamie know that it isn't Jamie's baby? I don't think you've said in the story and it's kinda making me wonder if it's cos they are waiting until they are married or whether he can't have children or something. If you're going to put it into the story at some point then you don't need to tell me now, but I would like to know at some point pretty pleasey! :P

Write some more soon please I really wanna know what happens next :D
Jess
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