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by SweetEire

person Fanny
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi Laura,
you're alive! ;-)
Wow, this chapter was really exciting.
I'm asking myself what she's going to do? Will she go to Orlando (I doubt that)
Pease let me know.
Hug and good luck for all your school stuff
Steffi
person Fanny
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi Laura,
what happened? Why don't you go on?
I want to know what happen next to Orlando and the others.
Please continue.
Hug Fanny

P.S. I hope that nothing bad happened to you.
person Kenna
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great storyline. When will we know what happens? Do tell!!
person Fanny
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi Laura,
I like your chapter, but it was a little bit complicated to understand what was fantasie or a dream and what wasn't that. You know what I mean?
But the rest perfect!
Please continue!
Hug Fanny
person Fanny
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi,
thanks for updating so fast!
Oh Good, she's pregnant. That's very exciting.
I am interrested in how Orlando and Jamie will react. She will tell them, won't she? I hope so!

All the best and till the next chapter :-) Fanny
person Laurie
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey great story! I'm hooked now....you have got to finish this? Does she do the right thing? Or does she follow her heart?
Let us know! Pick up that keyboard.....
person Fanny
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God! I like your story so much. The plot is good and I like your characters!
Please continue, I'm so curious!

Your "German fan" Fanny
P.S. I hope that I didn't make so manny gramma or writing mistakes. :-)