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for The Manipulated Life

by Erzulie

person Devyant
schedule January 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It has been...what, three years already ?
And there's no sequel to this one ? A deathwish on your part, pretty ?^^

GO WRITE WHAT WILL BE HAPPENING AT KYO AND KAORU'S NEXT ENCOUNTER DAMNIT !!! T__________________________T
person aerialsprite
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol me being who I am skipped straight to the sex scene -_-;;....

God that was so very, very hot. ^____^

go update more now *whines and paws at*
person Kimi Kumiko
schedule July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I honestly must say that this is a very well written story. It's quite a breather from all the other stories that seem to following the same PWP line and I would love to read more from you. I've already read most of your other works and I have to say your one of my favorite authors. Please write more, I want to read what happens when Kyo and Kaoru see each other again.
person spooky_doll
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
One of the best fics I have ever read. You write amazingly well and this was
differend from the others fics. That's why I really loved this one. Keep up the very, very good work!!
I'm waiting the next chapter ~__^
*Starts to wait, biting her nails*
person KaoNiikura
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very amazing!!!^^
i love kyo x kao
i hope you write the next chapter soon!^^
baibai
person DanSan
schedule July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I read this too already... but it's always good to read again what is worth it, ne?
Kyo uke is just yummy.
You gotta write one where Kyo touches himself, 'cause it's just unspeakable!
Keep!
person yami990
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more please. it's very good.
person Sakuchan
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!!!!
This fic is really good!!!
Please please more!!!! I want to see Kaoru as Kyo's master one more time *////*
It's really well written,you're so good!!!
And Die is such a...........here XD I hated him,I must confess!
I can't wait for a new chapter!
Good job!
person Skwishee
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooh I really like this story. Very well written, interesting plotline, KyoxKaoru sex X__;X I love you.
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GAH! finally managed to log on. Okay, First off, this story is awesome. I like the way you characterized everyone and I anticipate seeing more from you soon. I love your Kyo uke!