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for Temptation's Wings

by Erzulie

schedule February 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I can't even begin to explain how much I love this story. I like AU, but this one has got to be one of the top for me! It's very hard to pull off so much fantasy in a story without completely destroying the plot or characters, but I love it. It satisfies my need for an excellent storyline, and my perversion for abuse, slavery, and sex. >D

All in all, I hope you havne't dropped this story, because it has a ton of potential and I hope it continues. It's amazing!

Keep up the great work, and I know you won't leave me dissapointed.

P.S. Kaoru is a hot ass mother fucker and I love him.
person Isurixo
schedule February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMMGGG! This is probably the best fic I've ever read! Please update, ;__; since two years ago. I love all your stories, the way you write them is love. =D
person Kyouten
schedule January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...Wow. Just wow! I love this story; it's my favorite AU fic EVER! I'm inspired to do fanart for just about all of the characters... If you can send me an email so I can give you it, I'd love that! I'm working on a picture of Kyo right now... so yeah, just send me a note at kielianpup (at) yahoo (dot) com, and I'll get it to you. Thanks for writing such an awesome story!

~Kyouten
person anon
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O_O this is the best story I've ever read!!! UPDATE ASAP!!!!!!!!
person Devy
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhh !! Erzulie-samaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa !!
When will the next chapter appear here !! >o<
person Kodi
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah! My favorite author! ^-^; When will you update? I miss reading a chapter what felt like every week. It's been quite some time, ne? Get to it. -Snap snaps.-
person chan
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Erzulie-san ? Did you disapear ? TT
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nooooo! You must write more! I implore you! I've just gotten into it! How cruel can you be? *tear* *faves* I'm totally recommending this as soon as you get up the next chapter.
person Sayaka
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!
This is one of the best fics I've read in months!

I don't know what it is but your writing evoques the most vivid pictures in my head.
Normally I'm not that much into this whole fantasy stuff, but this fanfic really captured me.
The fact that you were able to create this whole realm of dragons and stuff, is just amazing.

And I dare say that the whole Training-chair-thingie was the best half-rape/half-lemon I've EVER read (and I've read a whole bunch of crappy lemons...)

Although the idea of male pregnancy is a little bit strange, I like it nonetheless because it's Kyo who gets pregnant.


Please, you HAVE to write on, I really want to know how the story develops!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Jen
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More more more pleeeeeaaase! ;o; I adore this fic and have been dying impatiently for an update. XD I want to see pregnant Kyo! I love the idea after reading what's been written so far. <3