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for Temptation's Wings

by Erzulie

person Sakuchan
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wah,I didn't expected the appearence of Hakuei...but the idea of him half goblin is great XD
Poor Kyo,seems that everyone for a reason or another,wants him as a slave... (me rises an arm: me too! me too! XD)
Well,maybe Kaoru will go and "save" his prey?
More more!
Good job!
person Cassie
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story and I was happy to see another update! I hate Hakuei and I guessing soon I will hate him more! I hope Kaoru saves Kyo soon! I want Miyavi punished for what he did! I hope Die and Totchi's relationship is going well since we haven't heard much on their part! I hope to read your next chapter soon! ^_^
person DanSan
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:D ;________; :D
You know I love your fic... please, update it soon, please!!!
person Kyo
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm in love with your dragon pixie Kyo, he's so adorable! In a..scary?..way of course, haha. Myv was such a douche, and certainly would have some form of an evil aura wrapped around his 'innocent' childish personality. I liked that. Kaoru is also very dominant with a rather...dominant pixie, as well, kudos to that for not making Kyo willingly (even though his body defies his mind) indulge in slave sex. Of course you have hinted that Kaoru does not see Kyo as a normal 'slave', and perhaps wishes for Kyo to love him some day, ne. This can only mean Kaoru needs to save Kyo to gain a form of trust! Woohoo, haha. I like this story a lot, but you make me feel like a shitty writter..xD~ fufufu. Hurry up with the next chapter!
person Stormywish
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OmG! I just love this story of yours. Awesome AU non-human fic! -hands you a choc-chip cookie- Thanks for writing this. but you are oh! so evil! The cliff hangers and the waiting, it's killing me! Please update as soon as possible, otherwise i might just die from the suspense.
person Aoi sama
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
0.0... thanks for updating ^^ *bunches of hugs* but omg >.> NO please don't kill toshiya..please?please?please?>.> kill shinya and yoshiki.. or miyavi!but not toshiya Y_Y anybody but toshiya...
and is hakuei going to rape kyo? YOU MUST WRITE THAT!! >.> i think it's a new kink of mine to read about kyo getting raped. This cliff is'nt as bad as the 'training chair' thanks again for updating~
*leaves triple the amount of chocolate as to save her poor toshiya , for she knows he's gonna die*
person Sakuchan
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You're always able to surprise me *_*
I'm really curious about Kyo's fate now!
Please more!
Good job ^o^
person Cassie
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh noooo.....! Poor Kyo! I don't like your mean Miyavi! There is going to be some character deaths! "_" are you gonna make me cry I don't want to cry... please make it mean people who die but you probably wont so I guess I will just have to prepare myself! I'm guessing Kyo is starting to wish he had stayed with Kaoru now and if he isn't I'm guessing he will soon! I hope to read more soon!
person Booper
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay!! It's turning out really well ^^ I like the latest chapter. The image I have of the goblins in my head is sooo so ooky.
person DanSan
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More... I demand more... I nearly scream when this fic is updated!
Make the next deaths be Toshiya and Shinya 'cause I fear a KyoxToshiya somewhere... Kyo seme is just not good .___.
But, nonetheless, continue, continue!!!