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for Temptation's Wings

by Erzulie

person DanSan
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Motto, come on, give me more okureyo :D
Continue!
person Cassie
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Poor Totchi and Kyo! I feel so bad for them! I hope they forgive each other when everything is said and done! I wonder what that sinister being is? I can't wait for more! I just love your story!^_-
person Sakuchan
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This chapter surprised me very much! Poor Kyo and Toshiya...I hope they won't start to hate or envy each other.....
I'd like to know more about Shinya..he's so secretive!
Good job! ^o^
P.S. I think that one of your ff couldn't become stupid ^^
person Cassie
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I just really love this story, I was so excited to see a new chapter for it! And wow was that chapter awesome! Their feelings for each other just keep getting deeper! The way you write and put together stories is just amazing! Oh I think the title fits the story really well! Oh I got several of my friends to read your story now they are all addicted to it as well! I hope to read more soon I will keep checking for your next chapter!
person Sakuchan
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! Another chapter!!! I couldn't wait for it ^o^
And it's so amazing *ç*
Maybe Kyo is starting to love Kaoru...? And the poor Toshiya then??
Good job!!
person Mochi~
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...my.. GOD.. O_O
Lurvley..
Oh, don't worry, dear. Fillers are always good.... at least in this fic.
*purrs*
Though, everything with this fic is good.
Now, MOREMOREMORE! ;P
person DanSan
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's worth it to spend a whole day writing such great chapter... *runs to the bathroom*!!!!!!!! @__@ XDDDD
Ok, this means I really, really, really, really, really enjoyed this chapter. Thank you!
Continue!!!
person Aoi-sama
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG >.> that was great.. demo.. please update soon! and I hope Die does'nt treat toshiya like kaoru does kyo.. pwease??? the way you had him written, it would seem that Die would be on the nicer side *hopes* and when is kyo gonna get pregnant?? xD i'm waiting for that.. seriously... please update again soon.. your fics are some of the best I've read.. *splatters pocky and icecream all over a table*
person yami990
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh very very good lemon scene. it was so hot it made me wet my panties. please continue. leaves pocky cookies and pudding.
person riya
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AAAa... why? why does it have to end so abruptly? please, go on with writing it! :) please... I haven't read so interesting story for a long long time :)