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for Something Unexpected

by DomesticFootcha

person Cassie
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved your story I hope you write lots more! Your writting is awesome and your sex scenes are steamy! You've got great story plot. I'm keeping an eye out for more of your stories. I did have a question though were the kids at the end their adoptive childern or just kids playing at the park?
person DanSan
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice fanfic... besides "Midnight Butterfly", this is the only fanfic with plot that is complete and I read 'till the end... ^__^ nice job!
Now, I want to read more from you, and damn, that thing that Kyo thought about paradise looking like a hospital XDXDXD... I just laughed my ass off!!!
Good job!
person sara-chan
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow ~claps~ i loved your fic! omg it made me giggle like a little schoolgirl then made me cry!!! omg its the best i have read so far!!! continue the good work im looking foward to a new one :D
~*sara-chan*~
p.s
the pairing was really unexpected (its still hard to picture but your storie mad it all happen) :D

p.s.s
can you please wright one with totchi and shin shin?!?!?! ~drools~ that would be awsome :D
thanks again
person bunny_no_hoogle
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WWWWWWAAAAAAAAAAAAIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Kyoko-chan lives and has kept our wonderful Koko and Shinshin together!!!!!!!! Yey!!!!!!! I cried on chapter 15! Kyon-kyon is so amazing, he can come back from the dead! Wai! *giggles and hopes off for her first cigarette, since she delayed it to read the new chapters*
person yami990
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh make up sex very much yummy. here's some nice brownies for being sucha nice author.
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You're so wonderful Kyoko-chan! Makes me feel all warm and fuzzy like! Sad it's the end though, but it was great while it lasted! Now if only I would end my story Unhappiness then all would be right in the world. I hope you start another fanfiction *hopefull grin* I will follow you! Hehehehe. FOOTCHA!
person yami990
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh very nice ending. please write more kyoxshinya in the future and post it please.
person DanSan
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
3 am and here I am reading your fic, although, I am getting stoned and I will have to read the rest tomorrow... nice so far ^___^
person Lacey
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Monosugoi! That was kick ass! I look forward to the next chapter! xD Keep up the awesome work!
person yami990
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh uber-angst for all of 10-14 except for the end. please continue tis very good. here's some nice pudding pie as reward.