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for Boys Will Be Boys

by DomesticFootcha

schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHA! Everyone's in the closet but Toshiya! (well kyo-kun is the mystery) Poor Toto can't figure out the others, awww. Shinshin and Toto are so cute together (no, toshiya (toto) is not the same as the mysterious toto in my story) although kyo and Totchi are hot as hell together ^_^. *Gives poor picked on Kyo candy and fried scorpians*
person yami990
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
die and shinya fighting over who gets totchi. please continue this is really good.
person Bunny_no_hoogle
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wai! Naked Totchi! Why can't he go naked? No one would mind! And as for the girl, what girl in her right mind would dump TOTCHI?!! *prepares a search and destroy mention* I'll kill for him ^_^ death by my guitar oughta be pretty painful. Mou, you're a writing machine, Kyoko-chan! Hehe, I should have a new chapter tonight, I dedicated it to you. Wah, Toto and Shinshin are so kawaii!!!!!
person Cyndiana
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More, you magnificent bastard, give us more!

^^

SOOOO very well-written and engaging!

The only thing I know, thus far, about Dir en Grey is they're hot, and my best friend LOVES them, and I am so thoroughly captivated...

I can't wait for the next chapter!
person Bunny_no_hoogle
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WWWWAAAAAAAAIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This chapter was so GREAT!!!!!!! I was gushing at the first line. I was giggleing so hard I wasn't sure I'd ever finish it! My favorite line was definately: Sometimes we wonder if your hand is permenently attached to your cock and the hand you use to play your bass is just a really good prosthetic. Hehehe!!!!! OMG this chapter was so great!!!!!! I better stop before I repeat myself too many times! Yey Totchi root for the home team and play with Shinshin and Kaokao!
person yami990
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
plase continue. this is good. i wonder whi the two fighting over totchi will be? here's some choclate to get you motivated to write more.