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August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
pls weite more!!!!????
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August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Review? I just started reading this fic today and I really love it.
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June 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is amazing.
More please!
More please!
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March 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love the story and pairing. Please update soon. :)
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March 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love the story and pairing. Please update soon. :)
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March 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love the story and pairing. Please update soon. :)
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February 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I just read through the whole fic and I like it. The plot is good but the spelling needs work. A lot is two words. Whole is part of a whole, hole would be ass hole. Your as in beloning to you, you're would be you are. "I know what you're thinking." The mother would be depressed, of in a depression. There are other spelling mistakes that could be fixed by proof reading. I want to read more of this because I like it. You don't have to change any spelling if you don't want to, I'm just trying to help.
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February 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn, now I feel stupid because there's a typo in my review suggesting spelling corrections. I do know the difference between of and or I just don't know how to read/type/ correct my mistakes before pressing enter. My bad!
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February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is a great story please update soon
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February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good update. things seem to be moving on its good. dont worry if people dont review you get tones of hits and you get rated so thats saying something right? well i hope there will be more soon. if not you will disapoint that one person who seems to be a fan. you gotta keep what you have so it gross you know.