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February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well i thought all hope was lost here but thank god you came back. the story is good dont change a thing. keep billy how he is in this. so he's being a girl guy dont matter it fits him in this. i like it alot and i cant wait for more
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October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great Story i love it.
Please update soon
Please update soon
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October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey there this is a really awsome story. you really should keep it updated more. i can't wait for the next chaptter
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October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey there this is a really awsome story. you really should keep it updated more. i can't wait for the next chaptter
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September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
kewl story, i cant wait till he meets the twins^^ hurry up and update dude
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September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story.Great work love
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August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YOU! INCLUDED.MCR.LYRICS! MY CHEMICAL ROMANCE ROCKS MY PANTIES! I LOVE YOU! AND THE STORY!!! OMG!! *spazz attack*
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August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:P I know I know I said I wasn't gonna but whatever. Even if ya didn't keep your promise here is mi review.
This is the best chapter so far, good job. You better update, you lazy bum. People actually like this so you got no excuse.
Really nice on all the characters, but I want some more Billy. Love the relationships on the characters. And another reminder. YOU DO have OTHER stories! Hn.
Anyway I do like it and hope you continue.
This is the best chapter so far, good job. You better update, you lazy bum. People actually like this so you got no excuse.
Really nice on all the characters, but I want some more Billy. Love the relationships on the characters. And another reminder. YOU DO have OTHER stories! Hn.
Anyway I do like it and hope you continue.
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August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yup myob is me the email guy hey i like what you have done so far keep up with same story line you got going i dont think you need any changes have him meet the twins and stuff and make lu and sey give the hint well
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August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have a few pointers for you. First off: less lyrics, more fiction. It can really kill a good story when there isn't enough of the story. Also, I think that Billy had blond dredlocks(spelling?) when he was younger. He might have been taller than 5'3 too. But, I'm not all that sure, because I haven't done extensive research [yet!]. Let me know if I'm wrong or if this helped. I love the story line though, it sounds very interesting. Keep up with it. I'll be reading Ch. 2 tomorrow, I don't have time after the review :-( Toodlez! --Ashlee