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hey i like what you got going here its really good keep it up

I'm loving your story, but the character bios are a little confusing. The ages and then their grades are messed up unless you want most of them to have been left back a year. Billy would be 16 would be either a sophmore or a junior, John would be out of high school, T.J would be out of high school, Tom would be either a junior or a senior, Sey is correct and Lu would be either a junior or a senior. The only way john and tj would be in high school would be if they failed to graduate on time.
But keep up the good story writing.

Nooooo! Billy! I can't believe you would keep him in your closet! (...Heh, when's he coming out?) You better feed him! ...Anyway...it's really good! I just wish that school would start soon so Billy could meet Benji and Joel... And I'm not too sure about John and Tim being together. I mean, it wouldn't hurt to get them together but I think it would be better if they just stayed friends. Plus, you can really torture Billy (Sorry but I *love* angst) so that he'll worry what his brother would think if he were gay AND you can put in a little bonding moment between him and John. And a lot more stuff. (Shrugs) I don't know... If you want to make John and Tim boyfriends, go right ahead. I'm just tellin' ya what I thought you could do if they stayed straight. ...And by the way, if you haven't decided if you want it to be a Benji/Billy or a Joel/Billy, I'm defiantly rooting for Benji/Billy. I just wanna squeal whenever I read/write about them doing...uh...things... Update soon!

Your getting off to a great start. I'm dying to read more, so it goes needless to say that you MUST update. Or else... (evil grin) I will take Billy hostage and you'll never see him again! Anyway, I'm looking forward to your next chapter!