rate_review Reviews

*purrs* That was nice. lol I mean DAMN! o.o The description is great. Everything you did for this story made it an absolutely grand PWP. I haven't read any PWP's lately because I was too busy reading some stories with plots, but I'm glad I took the time to read yours. ^_~ It was Dir en Gray, I couldn't help myself! And even though you say you're not a fan; you could have fooled me! You wrote it just like a crazy DeG fangirl. Just remember to start new paragraphs when another character is speaking. (My only grammer nit-pick. >.O) Great fic!
~SPUG

Yummy-ness! I loved it!

I loved it it was awesome! I think you should add lots more to it turn it into chapters where for awhile thats all Toshiya is to Die a playtoy! You have a great writing style I hope to read more of your work!

That just made my day XD.

hmmm...that's one of the first Die fics that I've read that I actually liked.

Keep up the good job on writing and yada-yada

this was really good. it'd be nice to read more fic if you'd post them. deg or not they would probably be good.

So hot. OH my God. Wonderful job. *_* I bow down to your skills!!

I think you did a good job on the character prescriptions, at least. I was expecting more of those two goofing off (since that's how those two usually act in each others' presence) but this, while differing from presumptions, is all the better. It made them both seem like human beings instead of just two asses jumping around. I didn't see the chair part coming, and it brought into mind a certain scene with Shuya and Nanahara... Right now I'm thinking of the words "mind control" when referring to the oral scene.

That being said, I absolutely Loved this fic. Thank you. And now I shall wonder off feeling numb and happily woozy...