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for Boom Swagger Boom

by LadyPhated

person Nia
schedule September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awsome... should make it more then a one shot! too cool!
person Miakia
schedule September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is sooo amazing, i'm seriouse contiue me and my friends were all melting! its too cute for words
person Miakia
schedule September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is sooo amazing, i'm seriouse contiue me and my friends were all melting! its too cute for words
person Josh
schedule September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HAVE TO CONTINUE! I'm an effen guy and I loved this! *questions his orintation* oh well i'll think about it later just keep going
person White Dragon
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That's all I can say. its such a beautiful story Kawaiiness ensured! Kudos to you be sure to add another chapter we can't wait to read on!!!!!! =D
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My first thoughts about this story: Awwww! It's so adorable. Orlando the helpful innocent one with a slightly pervy Elija. Unfortunatly, as I find so much here, you don't have nearly enough reviews for such a cute and well written story.
person Isabelle
schedule July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh! It's so cute! I love it! I want more! Please? Pretty please? I love it. Great writing!

Isabelle