rate_review Reviews

Did this fic die?... That really bites if it did... I was reading it! >_<

o_o Ok, I haven't finished reading, But I wanted to reveiw before I forgot to do so. Anyway! So far, I'm on chapter five and I love it. I wanted to invite you to my forum. It's a jrock fanfiction forum, and it's kind of .. Well kind of private, I only invite some of the best (IMO) writers I see. And o_o Well yea I'm inviting you! XD Sounds cheesy anyway. I do hope you join becuase as much as I love Yaoi. I LOVE straight fics more. o_o So please don't hesitate to stop by and join ok? Danke.

http://s9.invisionfree.com/miyavi

o_o It's not about miyavi, I was just obsessed with him when I made the site. >.> and Please Keep writing I love it!

o_o Ok so I just finished reading. >.> MORE DAMNIT MORE T_T This is so good. I can't wait till the next chapter, so please hurry! >_< And don't forget

http://s9.invisionfree.com/miyavi

-skry

(Who d'ya think you're kiddin'?
He's the earth and heaven to you
Try to keep it hidden
Honey, we can see right through you
Girl, ya can't conceal it
We know how ya feel and
Who you're thinkin' of)

No chance, no way
I won't say it, no, no
(You swoon, you sigh
Why deny it, uh-oh)
It's too cliché
I won't say I'm in love


These lyricks come into my mind when I read this fic. Keep going, I love it.

Heh..as usual..REALLY REALLY flipping GOOD!! I am in love with this story!!! *sighs* *yawns* I need more sleep...>< Oh well...GOOD GOOD STORY!!!!

SAKI- ack >< *cringes* sorry I'm gonna remember that... I think I was not really paying attention while writing or something... again, sorry

oi, awsome chapter! Lol, that was really good and please dont end it in the next chapter please! This is really good and its getting somewhere! IT IS! Please don't end it! It wont feel like a cpomplete story if you do. Oh please, lol. Its just to good to end so soon T_T lol, keep up the great work anyways, hopefully you'll make a sequel (consisting of more than one chapter, i hope) if you do end this story in the next chapter T_T lol, ja for now

Yaay.................is there gonna be sex???? Come on, I've never read where Shinya makes it with a chick...... ^___^

oh please continue. :) pleease... it's so sweet. i really like it, and it's refreshing that the members are straight for a once.

Oh I sooooo Love your story! Your writting is Awesome! Please update quickly! Oh and write more stories to or if you have any others out there let me know ok!