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October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Where did you get to make the girl from Sweden?
By the way, luv the fic!
see ya
By the way, luv the fic!
see ya
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October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nice story so far. The plot is unique, and the writing is good. Editorial corrections are easy to fix; choose beta readers who can help resolve them.
I look forward to additional chapters.
I look forward to additional chapters.
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July 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked this story a lot, you have a very good grasp of the language, far better than some English-speaking people I see on here! Very, very well written and I hope to read more soon!
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February 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
VEry good story, a good start and well, very good. I love it! Pls. continue the brilliant work!
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November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
When are you gonna update??
~Lexie~
~Lexie~
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September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a good fic so far...I can't wait for the next chapters! Keep up the good work!
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August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
With a little polishing, this could get really good. It's an interesting and pretty original idea, and there's a good non-sappy realism here.
HOWEVER! There are a lot of little mistakes that should have been proofread out before this was posted. Spelling errors, missing words, tense shifts - just too many distracting little errors. And they are distracting for many readers, it's hard to get really into a story when you're constantly saying "Oops, that's wrong".
Just a little more proofreading, and you could have something fabulous.
HOWEVER! There are a lot of little mistakes that should have been proofread out before this was posted. Spelling errors, missing words, tense shifts - just too many distracting little errors. And they are distracting for many readers, it's hard to get really into a story when you're constantly saying "Oops, that's wrong".
Just a little more proofreading, and you could have something fabulous.