rate_review Reviews

fabulous as always dear

can't wait till the next chapter

wow whatever you do, do not stop updating this story. love it to pieces man

Wow, poor trent and erin. I really like the way your writing this story and it seems like you've got trent's personality down to. I can't wait to read more, keep up the awesome work!

Wow, nice! You really plunged in here, trying to give us a realistic portrayal of these two, and letitng us know *why* they're doing what they're doing. With the two POVs, their talking at cross-purposes with each other comes clear in all its frustrating irony. I just hope we (and they) get rewarded for it in the end ;) I like the character of Erin, it's good to see an original female character portrayed with emotion and depth - makes her more likable than the more common perfect-body-very-little-substance characters one often sees, but that's just a personal preference. Glad to see my advice and everyone else's spurred you onward! Hooray for me!! Er, and you, also!

Aww noo! I hope everything works out. Great chapter, I really enjoy reading this!

::claps and cheers::

I loved this chapter, especially the tension between Erin and Trent as they were dancing. Plus I thought it was really cute how Erin singing along during a bit of their dance, being that that is something that I've done myself.

Aww they were so close. That was very sweet of Trent to protect her like that. I'm really enjoying reading this story, its awesome. Thanks for mentioning me to! I can't wait for more.

Loving it! The very slow buildup is perfectly paced considering the inevitability it's leading to - no need to rush into things here. The short, vignette-style chapters are a nice contrast to the wide scope of the story. I also like the way you explore the characters' thoughts, making it clear that Trent and Erin are meant to be while giving us a good taste of the perceptions and insecurities that might keep them apart. I'd like to see an aborted attempt or two at these two getting together before they finally give in; I'd also like to see a little bit more from each character's point of view before they come clean with each other (but that's just me, don't take my word for anything). Finally, well done in keeping the setup from seeming too forced, difficult given your ambitious plot line! Please keep writing, and I'll keep reading.

Awesome! Three chapters, I really love it, Erin and Trent would make such a cute couple. I hope you post more soon!

Aw, I was mentioned in the A/N. Anywho, once again thought this was a good chapter. Can't wait till the next :o)