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for Dreams, Decadence and Unveiled Desires

by moraine

person butabara
schedule June 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Why on earth did you stop updating this? Just when it starts to get interesting.
person Rina
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's good how you're taking the story slow and not rushing into things. Nicely written.
person (too lazy to sign in) Lilac Beauty
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is truly fantastic, and I look forward to more. :)
person Keenie
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice work. A very unusual storyline. The birdhandler is a neat idea! You write well with great internal dialogue. I'd like to see your chapters spaced out, instead of one big block of text. Makes it easier to read.