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October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Need more!!!!!!
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October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Although the intention of this being an adult fan fiction was clearly meant to be there, the contruction of this was limited and ended up rather poorly being something that a 10th grade high school student would have written to appeal to their own bored fantasies... I suggest more use of different imagery and better constructed sentence
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August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*makes incoherent noises*
HAWT!!!!!!
just a thought: you use the phrases "bubble of lust" and "moan of pleasure" too often. other than that it was goooooooood.
HAWT!!!!!!
just a thought: you use the phrases "bubble of lust" and "moan of pleasure" too often. other than that it was goooooooood.