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for Innocence

by slashfiend

person Zylo
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Jesus. This says so much in so few words. I normally don't like a lot of attention paid to less important things like what a character is wearing, but here it's the object and the point. Just telling us what he looked like with one short sentence about his dad was perfect.