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October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like the beginning of this. Hayden is agitated and impatient, but I can understand. At times, I'm sure his life is beyond hectic. I really look forward to seeing where you will eventually take this. Nicely done!
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October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok I'm back again. Having read the second chapter, I really hope you will pick up on this again. I enjoyed the genuine banter between the brothers, and the descriptions of the neighbors... very detailed. I could completely visualize them. Please visit this story again and add to it. Don't leave us hanging!
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September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sounds stupid *disgusted look* but your the writer, good luck. I don't like but other people do......so good luck. I PREFER NATALIE AND HAYDEN WAY BETTER. *SMILES*
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August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sounds interesting.
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August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good story writing! I hope you'll add to it soon! And yes I'll be looking forward to some Hayden sex in it too!
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August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh! good that A.J is somewhat black...that adds a little color to the story, exactly what we need...anyway...I hope you update soon..not to rush you or anything...just anxious! This story has great potential...
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August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so far, it actually seems to have a plot and be very realistic but I like dirty stuff too so I wouldn't be mad if you put some of that good stuff in there either....please keep updating soon......by the way is the character in your story named A.J. black? Just wondering...not trying to offend anyone....
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August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you! And don't worry, in future chapters, there will be some nasty stuff going on. Just don'tknow how long it would be until it'll actually happen. *scratches head* But not too long though. *smirks* And yes. AJ is black..somewhat. Her and her brother are half-black, half-italian; there father is black, their mother is italian. all that will be explained or talked about in the next chapter.