schedule
January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very good story. Well written. I liked the flow and I was interested all the way till the end. Kept my attention and I liked the way you wrote the last lines. Definantly well done.
schedule
August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Just one question - who the hell are Chris and Dave? There are so many Chris's and Dave's are out there. That's the problem with this section of AFF.net; people do not explain who they are writing about. We're not mind readers!