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for The One I Love

by TenshiNoReyire

person Forbiddensoul562
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I really love this story -like i said before- it really gives you a GOOD look at what Ville and Bam are thinking and feeling at differant times -like i also said before- Anyway basically i REALLY loved the chapter, sorry no idea's this time >< but i hope you update REALLY soon!
person JenaVeveValo
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(squeal!) OMJ it so made my morning when I seen that u had updated!!! LOL! I don't even care that there was no smut! So that means I'm really into this fic! LMAO!!! Please keep writing! I hope u get a writing surge again and post it up soon! Good luck, keep safe, and lots of lemony yaoi kisses!
Jen
*Peace*Love*Happiness*
person jade
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
beautiful.
person Wittykitty
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, all of your stories are just so sad. But I loved that so much, update asap
person Jade
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't know what it is about this story, but it has be in tears. It's so perfect it's crazy. I don't know if it's the story, or the fact that I listened to Beethoven's Moonlight Sonata throughout the entire thing, but this is a work of art. By far the best HIM fanfiction I've seen out there. I understand about your writers block, and I hope you get it together soon. This is a wonderful story, and I'd hate to see it go to waste.

Good luck, love.
person StapleKitten
schedule October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(does dance of insanity!!!) IDK what else you should write but write more because I love it!!! Pretty good with details but more with the fun fun!!! Kay good luck and lots of lemmony kisses!!! I love ya! Keep safe!
Jen
*Peace*Love*Happiness*
person Forbiddensoul562
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW that was REALLY awesome i loved EVERY SECOND of it!!!!! Anyways as for ideas i think u should have Ville have another nightmare that night or have another guy like before come looking for pleasure! Then Ville would have to find some way out of it without getting Bam involved in any way u know? But as for what happens in the day i think they should just have a quiet day you know? Since they already do a lot of soul searching... not that that's a BAD thing or anything! But since they did that and im not entirely sure of what they should do during the day. Anyways i have no account on this site but i am going to TRY and watch for a update no matter how hard that is or how long that takes it's WAYYYYx100 worth it!
person Chalysto
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sniffle...tear...so sad! So tragic! I LOVE it! It's so hard to find fin fiction w/Ville and Bam, finding V/B pairings is next to impossible and finding good ones is even less likely! If you know any sites w/Ville/Bam e-mail me! I'd also like you to know that I'm posting your fic on my site. Nothing will be changed and all crdit will be yours. The site is @ www.freewebs.com/nordicnight/ if you wanna see it. I just got it up so I'm still ading to it but there is a fic on there already. that was excellent! Kudos!

Leo Carmine.
person Crimson_Revenge
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww... That was really awesome/adorable/hot?!! Oh man... I LOVE how Ville calls him 'sweetheart'! It's sooo cute!! I hope you continue soon!!
person Crimson_Revenge
schedule August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn... I really wish Ville would tell him. I don't believe Bam would turn on him...