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April 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I don't know what my emotions are doing like seriously I've been crying for most of this fanfiction and the times I wasn't crying was when I was laughing and I just ugh life.
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August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Third time I've read this. I cry every time. I'm such a wuss XD
update the new story! I'm going craaaazy!
update the new story! I'm going craaaazy!
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February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
There's something about this story that keeps me coming back to reread it over and over again... it's a gem. Except priceless. I hope this thing never gets deleted. -_-;
The sequel is awesome too, btw.
The sequel is awesome too, btw.
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January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
SCEQUEL!!!!!!!
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January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, Gods, I've never cried because of a fanfiction before... wow... that was amazing.
Ironic thing, that probably made me cry the most? I was listening to "Whatsername" whilst reading this chapter.
This was really amazing, you should write a sequal or something, but I'd understand if you didn't. It's perfect the way it is. Well done =)
Ironic thing, that probably made me cry the most? I was listening to "Whatsername" whilst reading this chapter.
This was really amazing, you should write a sequal or something, but I'd understand if you didn't. It's perfect the way it is. Well done =)
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January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit XD I just finished chapter four. First off, this is amazing. Second off, poor Billie Joe, it was only a dream!! I nearly burst out laughing, that was a hilarious ending, very nice!
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You're joking! No way... There must be like... Like a sequel or something! That can't be the end... As amazing as it was and all... Dude, great shit man. I hope you write more soon.
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I know I already reviewed this, but I have to again. I have to give out major props to Sapphire, because this is simply put the best story I have ever read. Yes we would like them to get together, but its a realistic ending. You are amazing at writing stories. Im kinda glad about the Suicide Blond thing because I will like to see what happens after. Hopefully they will get together. But The Babysitter will always be the best fanfiction/story I have ever read. Makes you laugh, makes you cry, even makes you horny! Haha. This is the best story ever. Thank you, thank you, thank you!
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January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I cannot tell you how much I love this fic.
First of all, I was a bit hesitant to read celeb fics, simply because most of them seem to be mostly 'Would it be so cool if I hung out with Green Day? This is my story about Green Day loving me!'
But you have written a story that really only incidentally is based off real people. Really it's just a very real story that is absolutely fucking beautiful.
Your characterizations are first of all absolutely excellent. I fell in love with Ava from the beginning, obnoxious bitch and all, and Billie and Tre were portrayed pretty much exactly how I would figure. The relationship between Ava and Billie really developed organically, not something that seemed forced so that we could get to the juicy sex scenes.
Though my GODS, the sex scenes were all absolutely hot! You write fantastically, and it came through even in your lemons. Just amazing, hot, but also tender and real.
And your writing dear. I cannot tell you how much I love your writing style. I -wish- that my stuff flowed as well as yours. Just the actual structure of the writing, as well as the places you take it, seemed very real, very natural and very beautiful. And the depth you gave to Cara, proving that she really wasn't just some random whore that was trying to drag Ava down with her, making her a REAL person.
And the tie ins to the new album... very subtle, and I really appreciated it. I had my media player on shuffle while I read this, and on occasion the songs that I think you were thinking of when you wrote parts would come onto the player.
Suffice it say that I laughed, I cried, I got horny... this was a wonderful, amazing piece of work, and I love it to pieces. It is now on my reccommended reading list!
First of all, I was a bit hesitant to read celeb fics, simply because most of them seem to be mostly 'Would it be so cool if I hung out with Green Day? This is my story about Green Day loving me!'
But you have written a story that really only incidentally is based off real people. Really it's just a very real story that is absolutely fucking beautiful.
Your characterizations are first of all absolutely excellent. I fell in love with Ava from the beginning, obnoxious bitch and all, and Billie and Tre were portrayed pretty much exactly how I would figure. The relationship between Ava and Billie really developed organically, not something that seemed forced so that we could get to the juicy sex scenes.
Though my GODS, the sex scenes were all absolutely hot! You write fantastically, and it came through even in your lemons. Just amazing, hot, but also tender and real.
And your writing dear. I cannot tell you how much I love your writing style. I -wish- that my stuff flowed as well as yours. Just the actual structure of the writing, as well as the places you take it, seemed very real, very natural and very beautiful. And the depth you gave to Cara, proving that she really wasn't just some random whore that was trying to drag Ava down with her, making her a REAL person.
And the tie ins to the new album... very subtle, and I really appreciated it. I had my media player on shuffle while I read this, and on occasion the songs that I think you were thinking of when you wrote parts would come onto the player.
Suffice it say that I laughed, I cried, I got horny... this was a wonderful, amazing piece of work, and I love it to pieces. It is now on my reccommended reading list!
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January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So sad you are awesome!