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for The Babysitter

by redqueeninwonderland

person G3ekStinkBreath
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You're killing me with everyday that this isn't updated! Marvelous. I want more, but do take all the time you need.
person cRiSpY cReAm
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
o0o that to me was hot..lol dun dun duuun he told her to lock it! good idea! not..lol cant wait for another update...later
person gfh
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
fgh
person Sarah
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
God this is so good. I've been following it for awhile. Sorry I'm just now getting to the review box. It's very involved and more than just shameless smut (which I DO love) but this is just...fantastic. You write human emotion and how we react to it very well. Keep up the good work! I'll keep reading. :D
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heck.

I can't add anything to what's already been written. They're all absolutely right. It's a fantastic piece of writing.
person Anon
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
do it do it... and i bet you wont post for along time now. hmm will he or wont he? wont he.
person Anon
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
haha so she is in love maybe? no.. just kidding. post soon! screw your other work.
person G3ekStinkBreath
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Honest to God, you're killing me here. I have to actually wait for another chapter? Can't I just snap my fingers, and POOF, it'll be here? Damn, I guess not. But putting all of that aside, this is the best piece of Green Day fanfiction I've read. Everything is very clear to picture and it all runs smoothly, and more importantly it's not at all cheesy (like most of the other stuff I've read here). Great job! You're doing fucking awesome and I can't bear another day without the next chapter. :D (So please post it A.S.A.P)
person ThisIsGreenDay
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MORE MORE MORE MORE! Hehe.
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It just keeps getting better and better. Even without the ginormous, awesome, sex scene like in the last chapter, this is still an amazing chapter.