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for The Babysitter

by redqueeninwonderland

person Deefor
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the way you're developing this story. More, please!
person warding_off_regrets
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story! I can't wait to see where you go from here :D
person alicia
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
my i got my hopes up thinking it be another chapter..but no =[
HURRY! please..?
person ThisIsGreenDay
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Are you gonna write more?
person heartgrenade13
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sweet Baby Jesus!!!! That was one of the greatest sex scenes ever...better then in most movies..and it was in my mind..oh thank you for that...wow...
person Deefor
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely stunning. That was one of the best sex scenes I've ever read, but I'm not just praising it for that; the whole thing was beautifully written. Funny, realistic, readable...OK, the scenario with the babysitter is a cliche, but who the hell cares when it's done as well as this, and with the twist at the end? Brilliant.

If this is the end of the fic, it stands very well as it is; if you're going to add to it, I look forward to it!
person ThisIsGreenDay
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS THE BEST EVER! Totally awesome writing! Super...SEXY!
person sfhd
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I SSSSSSSSSOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO knew IT!!!! it was a little obvious lol. i had this weird feeling all thorughout the chapter i was like ' why is she taking him in a seperate room?' does she have something up her sleeve? like a person can see through a window? does she want him caught? i liked it in his view better ... but why would it be in hers? it was his drea,m post soon!
person LeVeL
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please don't tell me that's the end. You can't just leave it like that. You MUST continue. Please?
person Sia
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If you don't update soon I might start to cut myself a little...just a little. DAMMIT!
Umm, Medic?