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January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have to say, this story is freaking amazing!
The writing is consistent, the characters engrossing and very realistic, and my gods! Some of the hottest sex action I've EVER read. Best written smut I've seen in ages, and the first thing in forever to actually get me a little hot and bothered!
The writing is consistent, the characters engrossing and very realistic, and my gods! Some of the hottest sex action I've EVER read. Best written smut I've seen in ages, and the first thing in forever to actually get me a little hot and bothered!
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January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOO!!!!! THIS CAN'T BE OVER!!!!
He needs to be with her!!! She needs to be with him!!!
NOOOOO!!!!
Sorry about the caps abuse, I just don't want this story to end!!!
Will there be a sequel? Will you write another story?
You are such an awesome writer. This is definitely my favorite story on here.
*mourns*
He needs to be with her!!! She needs to be with him!!!
NOOOOO!!!!
Sorry about the caps abuse, I just don't want this story to end!!!
Will there be a sequel? Will you write another story?
You are such an awesome writer. This is definitely my favorite story on here.
*mourns*
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December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely loved it. I think you should write a sequel. In fact, I'd go as far to beg you to write a sequel.
PLEEEEEEEEASE!!!!! I think you should go forward those 4-5 years and ...well. It's your story.
Please email me. I'd love to know if you're going to write more!
-Selene
PLEEEEEEEEASE!!!!! I think you should go forward those 4-5 years and ...well. It's your story.
Please email me. I'd love to know if you're going to write more!
-Selene
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December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Amazing. Really amazing. I was so hooked on this story I read it beginning until end in one day. :] I can't think of anything other to describe this story, simply amazing.
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was a wonderful story that affected me in great ways. I thank you for writing it.
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December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You should write a book. Like, honestly. You rock!
OMFG, that's the best story ever. I love it so much. the best ending ever. You do rock. You could publish this!! Well, you could change the names, so it wouldn't seem like a fan-fic, but a really well-thought story about an older entertainer-guy and a young girl, who still is a teenager. It's perfect.
If this is the ending, maybe I'd like maybe just a chapter or something, that explains how it went for her. Or maybe not. This is the perfect ending,maybe that would ruin it. This story is MANIFIQUE, perfect, lovely, great and very, very good.
I have enjoyed this story SO so so so much. You MUST write more stories.
Congrats! You have made .........................
T H E P E R F E C T S T O R Y E V E R!
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December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ack no...it over!!! BUt it was a good ending....but I say that you write like a 3 years later sequal....like Billie and Ava were talking about....please?:( haha im desperate--Good job with this fic it's my #1 favorite!!!
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December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No! Don't end it there! MEH!
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December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sequel!
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December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that's it?no more, you can't do that to your readers akfoiawerh24732635ehr923y0hdf2317-